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Paul Neufeldt
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I'm a consummate creative type: writer (of genres and styles various), artist, inventor and full time graphic designer.
THOUGHT CURRENTS:
Sense of self, considered. So much of what we are is social and much of that is the judgment by one's self and others.
"p r I s m"
I
Reflect
upon my doppelganger
mirror to mirror, perception repeating, receding
the mind sighs
I i i i i i i i iiiiiii?
introspective prism
seeking truth
hidden amongst contemplative roots
the seventh sense
to ??know thyself?
observed through two milky orbits
about a pulpy loaf of ken
judged, measured, weighed
defined
What am I
in the reflected facets of personal truth
amongst the shifting scenes
seen by self and seen by Other
thus
I am meat
fresh cut
bloody
and delicious!
I am pseudopodia
laced with cilia
unmindfully oozing through
mud
I am one
and I am five
fingers, senses, toes
affixed to flailing limbs
on a keg of guts
tap me
to drink my bitter
sops
I am eye
looking blindly
ear hearing only echoes
tongue flapping tasteless
nose snorting, sneezing out
experiential gobbets
wiped away by deft fingers
tethered to fractal joins
the whole barely balanced
staked to worries and regrets
scorched in self-conscious emotive bonfires
possessed by demons who summarize
all that has been
past
I am sane
and I am mad
laughing inanely at the endless cycle
within the life cycle
ahahahahahah!
Lust
live
love
leave
I am I
and I am by
you misjudged, misconstrued
mired in the social cauldron
stewed subjunctives of me and you lie
rancid
I am lost
You've defined me
now find me
Outside of you
outside of time's illusion
outside of ego's delusion
behold the true
I
(Read this like a mobius strip, starting at any stanza and all the way through, it repeats in circular thought. Graphically imagine a circle, beginning of each line to the center, a stylized eye at the core.)
PANeufeldt's Genres: Science fiction, horror, fantasy, poetry, plays, satirical work.
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