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| The simplicity of this is what makes it great. It was well written and cute. I really enjoyed reading it. Nice work. =) |
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| i like this because it is clever; childish and sinister simultaneously. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-08 03:52
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| Now that is something else. A throw-back to the toy soldiers days, the 'army guys' with grandma. Good memories. |
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| haha... i remember playing with those green little army men! usually in a sand box and plastic dinosaurs... haha.. that was so much fun... actually took them to a beach one year and lost over half of them to the wrath of the ocean lapping over them... hah.. maybe i'll write my own plastic army guy adventure... we'll see. great poem.. |
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| Nice, love the childhood simplicity of it. |
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