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NAKED MEN Poem
when NAKED MEN
are NAKED
they are
without defense
they are
there
all there
I see right through
those slender hips,
tight asses,
smooth chests
and lust-filled eyes
I see
them
I see those
NAKED MEN
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Is this about the old trick about seeong people naked when you give a speech?
I myself do not enjoy naked men. I can deal with it, but do not prefer it.
RJA |
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-There is this great decision we must make before even seeing your poem. Do we want to see something explicit?
-Interesting, but not at all offensive.
-There is nude. Nude is beautiful. Naked, on the other hand, is something we find under a rock, or when we open a 6-hour old cowpie.
-I very much like your poem. It opens up a rich thought.
-I have dreamed of being suddenly unclothed in public. Figured out that it occurs when I am absolutely honest, without guile, without need of defense, or when I am caught out! It no longer bothers me so much. I have in reality walked nude (but not naked) in front of 100's of people, but those earlier dreams were more embarrassing.
-This is a tricky poem. Tricky in its apparent simplicity.
-"Penis Man" has but one goal.
-Thanks. |
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Comment by: - 2007-02-10 08:49
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| i've commented before...but...this is so true. naked men are funny. men are always naked. why are men always naked? men are so egotistical. but it's fake, and it gets annoying...why am i ranting...damn, it's been a long week. DIG YOUR POEM:-) that's all |
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| This almost makes *me* feel naked, even though I'm not a man. But I know what you're saying. It's like they aren't even aware of how much they expose. |
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Comment by: fredav - 2006-08-15 06:46
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| this is nice..i kinda like the lightness of this..nothing to think about but naked men...well, naked gorgeous men anyway..lol |
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