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| Passionate, with so few words - the last line a sadness. Great work Louis. |
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| This is my kind of read, bravo! I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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| It is a bit cliche |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-04 22:02
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| I love your honesty in here and your brut force. your words in here get to you with the truth and they will connect with you and you feel all the hurt and all the ignorance ( not the poem, but what the poem is about - some stupid people! ) ... this is really brilliant... good poem. very shocking. very straight forward. |
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| it looks like its already been said, but this is an awesome poem. i love the ending. reminds me of a U2 song. |
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