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fiveringsstudent
Colin Ellis
United States, MO, Kirksville

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Friend of a Day

As I walk to class,
A tiny voice calls to me
I follow the tinkling,
And find a yellow dandelion.

"Take me up,
Take me with you
Show me how life is
And be my friend."

Gingerly I reach down
And take it from its perch.
I put it in my hair,
To see what I see;
So I may see what it sees.

It whispers me down the sidewalk,
Fairybell voice in my ear
It sings me into the buildings,
Mourns the lack of

Color
Wind
Sunlight
Then rejoice upon re-entrance outside.

I talk to it,
Play it music
And show it who I am, more even than
I have ever down with my peers,
Because it truly wants to know.

As the day goes on,
The tiny voice grows quiet.
now it murmers softly
Starting to fade from sound...

"Thank you," it whispers
"For showing me who you are.
How life is
As you see."

The voice tinkles no more;
The golden shine is gone.
And as I remove it from my hair,
Empty,
One small petal floats to the ground
Accompanied by a tear.

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PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-25 17:45
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Great read.
mom Comment by: mom - 2006-05-05 18:57
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How sad. I think I really will miss the sweet smelling flower. Strange how the things you believe know us the most disappear so
very quickly. Loved it.
mooseturkey Comment by: mooseturkey - 2006-04-16 08:03
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A talking flower with feelings, who would've thought it? But you made it work well. Great.
InternalThoughts Comment by: InternalThoughts - 2006-04-11 12:17
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I absolutely love this poem and it's such a good visual story. I think it was amazing the way you express the idea that it's hard to open up to your peers when you feel they really don't care what you are like in reality. I'm totally feeling you there and I hope you find someone to open up to soon that will love you for who you are. :)
tootwitchy Comment by: tootwitchy - 2006-04-07 19:11
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Amazing and brilliant subject matter. I absolutely love the idea behind this poem. I think it also portrays exactly what a plant would desire if it were truly aware. I enjoy reading your work very much.
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