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Bbounty1
Scott Waugh
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Backs Against the Wall

You and me...
we will always be...together...
with our backs against the wall.

For sixteen months and fourteen days
I've marched these dusty roads,
With my back against the wall.

M-16, army green, it's out of my control,..
and my back's against the wall
Yes my back's against the wall.

We named our youngest Carolina.
She was born in Tennessee.
The army moved us to California,
to a base down by the sea,
and our backs against the wall.
Yes our backs against the wall.

You and me...
We will always be... together...
With our backs against the wall.

A man draws near with fists in the air...
and murder in his eyes,
and my back's against the wall.

White hot flash, smoke-filled sky,
it's out of my control...
and another daddy dies,
and my back's against the wall.
Yes my back's against the wall.

We named our youngest Carolina.
She was born in Tennessee.
The army moved us to California,
to a base near by the sea.
And our backs against the wall.
yes our backs against the wall.
You and me...
we will always be... together...
with our backs against the wall.

Seventeen months and fifteen nights
of fire, smoke and flies.
With my back against the wall.
Another bloody day there's been hell to pay,
It's out of my control...
and another child cries,
and my back's against the wall.
Yes my back's against the wall.

You and me...
we will always be... together...
with our backs against the wall.
yes with our backs against the wall.

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fishbowl42 Comment by: fishbowl42 - 2007-02-28 22:35
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Vivid, and poinent. the repetive nes lends whell the mood you set.
mom Comment by: mom - 2006-04-26 19:42
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Unbelievable how real your songs are. Amazing. I Envy your talent.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-25 06:11
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Been there and done that, as to counting the days in those situations, and know where you are coming from with this song. Well done.
bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-04-24 19:47
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There is definitely a lot of feeling in your words Scott. "Back's against the wall" is a great line. Like Funkeylele said, counting the days and months really puts the reader into that perspective of what it's like for a man putting his life on the line, taking another's away and having no control over it. "You and me will always be together" makes me think the woman you're referring to, will always be with you no matter what may happen, even if you can't control it. Great job...I'd love to hear more. :)
Comment by: - 2006-04-19 08:04
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Great song. Very powerful lyrics. Keep it up. Best wishes, Lee
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