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Can you feel the heat between us?
Almost morphing in to one
Did you have any idea?
Before tonight
Sugar on my lips
Anticipation is almost as sweet as the act
Becoming a single entity
Together
Sharing oxygen
Bodies in perfect rhythm
Say my name again
Hair rises on the back of my neck
Having to remember to breathe
Cold sheet in my fist
Arched back
Release
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"Anticipation is almost as sweet as the act" need i say more? ok, yes i can't keep my big mouth shut. ANTICIPATION is the beeeeeeeest. Nobody gets that anymore. They just want to get the deed done. I feel sorry for those people because they never experience the utter ache for someone.
Niiiiiice! Great flow, great choice of words. I think the opening line, really opens up the possibility of sweltering heat in this one! 'Cold sheet in my fist'-- love that line.
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