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billiethakid
Billie ThaKid
United States, Georgia, Atlanta

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Thoughts of a Cracker

My job is to keep the slave niggers in line and when they find themselves out of line, I am obliged to crack my whip over their sable flesh until the animal is properly tamed. This is what I've been hired to do. Now, I hear-tell that some of those Yankee, nigger-loving big wigs are talking seriously about letting all the niggers free. Claim they don't believe they are animals. But, I watch em' everyday; from the crack of dawn, till' that hot Carolina sun decides to hide itself again. And the only thing that one may find 'special' about this group of ignorant animals is that they adapt and wane very easily. I can crack their backs until their blood is covering me on let's say a Friday, and by Saturday that same one is right back singing and jolly again. I can snatch a newborn babe right from under its mammy's tit and sell it, and that same wench mammy is right back tending to her duties even better than before.

People are talking about what the 'educated' and 'free' nigger is capable of doing. They say some have special abilities. Yeah, I've heard of one of 'em being praised by Thomas Jefferson himself for making almanacs and designing the Yankee capitol (and they weren't set free then) and of em' writing books that white people actually buy. I've even heard talk of them fighting in our wars for us and actually being called heroes. Just because a handful of niggers have some abilities as do white folks does not disprove that they're all still a bunch animals. Perhaps, these niggers with some white ability have been given an anointing from God to be able to better serve their masters. Maybe instead of all of 'em being good for nothing and stupid, they can indeed be good for something. But all of their head niggers would like for us to believe that they are just as human as us and we should just let 'em free and live happily ever after, together. But this proves my point, that they are still stupid animals. They don't seem to understand the fact of the matter, which is that no matter what these niggers do, whether they're inventing things, or fighting in our wars, or even trying to teach other niggers, they were brought here to be niggers, and even if they are indeed 'set free', they will in fact die here as niggers.

* The above piece is fictitious and is for the purpose of a summation of the irrational mindset of White Southerners [specifically overseers (often called 'crackers' due to their ability to swiftly and consistently 'crack' the whip)] during the ending of the era of slavery. Co-written by H. Elisha

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BrookeOlive Comment by: BrookeOlive Online- 2007-08-20 19:35
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Thought provoking piece. Here in Australia, cracker is used as a term for a girl that is admired, especially by men, as in "She's a cracker!" It's strange how terms can have different meanings in different places. I found it a very rich honest piece of writing and thank you for the read.
silent Comment by: silent - 2007-08-06 13:37
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I like the point the story comes from and how you told it as they would
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2007-07-25 21:20
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Your piece is so raw, so hard hitting, so damning. I read it over and over trying to capture in my mind, the feel of it, the underlying outrage, the implicit anger.
I hope I understand the irony you project and your message.
I hope also that you take my remarks as I intend them: Wanting to improve the impact of this powerful piece and not reflect on you or your writing.
This is written as a first person account by an ignorant and probably illiterate, hate-filled extremist. You capture his voice well in some places, but lose it in others. "Sable flesh?" Wouldn't this ignorant, illiterate, hate filled person say something snide and hurtful and stupid like "black ass" instead?
Think what a redneck cracker would say, then write it. Capture his voice and use it to further the story.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2007-07-25 19:27
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Yup, too many still think this way. Plain ignorant. I saw the title and had to read it. My former b/f's 80+ yr old uncle used to call me the Cracker Girl. 'You still with the Cracker Girl?' I never had a name, but it made me laugh anyway. What else are you going to do? The man was too old to change.

Great voice in this. I'd cut the use of apostrophes and let the dialect and vernacular shine through on its own. You have a very clear voice, and the apostrophes threw me off. However, if you wish to keep them, you should put them where the missing letter are, i.e. 'til, 'em, etc. Not after. Very nitpicky thing, I know.

Thanks for the read.

Teri xo
LittleMSMorbid Comment by: LittleMSMorbid - 2007-06-22 11:06
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Hmmm. I live in a trailer park in northern MS so you can imagine how many people I am exposed to daily that still ascribe to that way of thinking on some level. You captured the ethnic arrogance and ignorance of the *cracker* well.
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