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| thank you everyone for your comments, it was an attempt to explain to myself how i felt about what i was doing for someone at the moment -- not that i thought about it before i acted in the way i did. not that i would hesitate to act like this as much as i can. |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2006-03-31 16:27
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| This is very nice. So much compassion. It's a wonderful poem about reaching out to someone who is going through a difficult time. |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-03-31 08:29
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| Again, very supportive. Well done! |
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| Paul, this was such an outstanding poem that I printed it out for a friend of mine who speaks exactly like that. Fine writing. |
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Comment by: aikaida - 2006-03-31 05:55
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i'll be the dam for your tears
i absolutely love this line. your wrok is just beautiful. i cant help but be nothing buit impressed. you have a way of expressing yourself in a way i cannot begin to describe! good job and happy writting! |
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