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Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-06 23:20
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| Yes I shall have to echo the sentiment bellow me, which I am reading now to be from so long ago. I am suprised that this has not aged as well as it deserves to have done so. |
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Comment by: Mernard - 2006-07-17 11:02
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| I like how the poem twists its way from appearing to be another wrist-slasher to one leading towards happiness. At least, that's how I interpreted it. |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-05-02 01:27
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When I read the first line, I thought that this was going to be another dark depressing poem, but it wasn't. You did a good job here. I enjoyed it. Just a thought - "dead decay" - is redundant.
Anything decaying is dead. I think! Anyway, I like it. |
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| Very good. Well pieced together. I like it a lot. Nice Title. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-23 02:14
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| YOur very talented and capture a range of emotion and the desire we all feel to know that we are alive. |
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