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Skytteflickan88
Caroline Levén
Sweden

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When the sun....

When the sun goes up,
there's a bright, bright sky.
It makes me wonder,
how it is to fly.

When the sun goes down,
there's a red, red sky.
It makes me wonder,
how it is to die.

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Comment by: - 2006-04-04 11:52
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nice words. great imagery fills my head when i read this. even though it's so short, you've said all that needs to be said.
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-04-03 10:44
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Short and sweet.
Comment by: - 2006-03-31 02:04
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Light is life, death is forever.

You strike my attention. Use the darkness, don't let it use you.

Great work.

Wraith
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