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Skytteflickan88
Caroline Levén
Sweden

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Longing to linger

I've been longing
to linger
in someone's mind.

For someone to
see
me
And only me.

Forever.

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-09-16 04:34
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*sigh* Another lovely poem. Isn't that all we want.
Comment by: - 2006-05-31 22:27
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who doesn't want that? seems like a desire to be known and recognized is central to love. short poems have to be effective in their language. this is. kudos.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-13 07:45
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Love the set up of this short piece, effective and lovely over al. Great write. Nice statement, nice to see some one has a mind int hat head. A very rare thing in this day and age.
Comment by: - 2006-04-04 11:51
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i love, love, love this. everything about it. reminds me of my favorite chili peppers song...
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-04-03 10:45
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Short, no waste. Well done.
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