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wellnessthruplay
Jodi Eyraud
United States, CA

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Imprints

She left for me upon my pillow:
A scent, a strand of hair, worn mascara,
An eyelash, long and thin,
An imprint of a night spent

She left for me upon my skin:
A stroke of her foot,
A brush of her hair,
Warmness of her body
The sweetness of her smell

She left for me upon my face:
A trace of lipstick,
Two lips pressed with grace,
A touch of her lashes,
A gentle stare

She left for me upon my heart:
A touch gentle and warm,
Secrets of truth, hers to share,
Hurts and sorrows, left to feel,
Two hands holding, love overflowing

She left for me upon my mind:
Fallen hair across her face,
Eyes longing,upon my soul,
A body falling, as if to melt,
Sweet whispers, not to share,
Future visions of her, me

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lettea Comment by: lettea - 2007-01-09 02:14
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Hi!
I thought this poem was very real,tender my only thought maybe I'd like to see the first line of each stanza different.
antonanon Comment by: antonanon - 2006-12-27 08:57
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Great piece. Inspiring in its tenderness and the things you notice
bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-04-20 07:28
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absolutely gorgeous, tender, and very well written. i don't know what else to say but that i love it & congrats! - Bon
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-04-10 21:47
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Lovely. Congratulations!
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2006-04-08 13:29
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I have nothing to add to what have been said already. I can just say that I agree that this is beautiful poetry in motion. Such a soft touch you have with words. Really great!
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