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richardringer
Richard Ringer
United States, Ohio, Surface of Mars

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Sight

There isn't a day that goes by where I don't feel like ending it
there is no magic holy book
there are no easy answers
the rest of the world is blind
I am cursed with sight
Perfection is a pipe dream
A reality in the minds of fools and hopefuls
Life is a burst, a chance
Clouded minds are the majority
Empty entertainment fills the days of those who think there is more
They waste all they have.

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Min Comment by: Min - 2006-04-14 23:13
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A sour or, perhaps cynical, observation of life.
Comment by: - 2006-04-09 13:44
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I like this. I know exactly how you feel too.
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-07 13:42
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you write sooooooooo well keep on...cool
holy smoke Comment by: holy smoke - 2006-04-02 19:44
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This is a really good poem. Last two lines are great.

Empty entertainment fills the days of those who think there is more
They waste all they have.

Nice stuff!
Khema Comment by: Khema - 2006-04-02 13:33
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i see clearly where you stand here. i'm standing there beside you! very well done. when i have some time i 'm going to check out your latest story. K~
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