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Comment by: luswart - 2006-04-14 14:43
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Helix,
I enjoyed the imagery of this work. I would have liked to see some puncation as I have always felt that it is only with the puncation that you can truly read the poetry the way that the writer meant it to be read.
Thanks for sharing!
I hope to see more of your poems
Thanks,
Lu |
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| enjoyable read! |
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| I enjoyed reading your poem. Winters in New Zealand are usually wet cold and miserable. Snow is usually confined to Mountain range, though the south Island gets the occasional blizzard. It was good to read a positive perspective on winter. |
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| Very nice picture of a winter night. The rhyme-scheme is very pleasant, and delicate; not in any way forced. Good read. |
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Comment by: jandix - 2006-04-01 13:02
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| I loved this piece,it made me view a scene of winter.I believed i was there. your friend should kick your butt more often. |
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