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Matthew Eduard Abuelo
Matthew Abuelo
United States, New York, New York City

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The Crow

The Crow
(For Alex)
(From Last American Roar)

The crow flew from his eyes,
signifying migraine headaches and opium withdrawal.
He shit in this hall of white walls
and TV sets that show 12 hours of snow.
The cure,
Lightening shot through the skull to straighten out the machinery of the mind,
All the way to the vegetable night.
1996.
You were holy that year.
Did you say farewell to the night?
That is,
did you love the sick bird that much to try
and swallow it,
and yourself, whole,
or is that blood that runs down from your lips a sign of a greater
sacrifice?
I know that white vase that you hold under your tongue
keeps your feathered friend from escaping at night,
only to return with an addict's curse by day.

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Dante Comment by: Dante - 2008-03-23 07:42
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This is a good description of addiction. "Lightening shot through the skull to straighten out the machinery of the mind" is a great line - so true and powerful. Thanks for the good read, Dante.
thelonelyguy Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-02-11 17:02
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Feel the burn! Powerful and clear. Extremely visceral. Love it.
Comment by: - 2005-06-06 07:30
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Great metaphors for drug use, paraphernalia and general feelings of shitiness due to drug use, ei: "white vase", "vegetable night", "TV sets that show 12 hours of snow" etc. Also interesting use of cadence.
Comment by: - 2005-06-06 00:46
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I like this one a great deal. Short, powerful - hits you like a suckerpunch to the gut and leaves you wanting more...
Alan Emmins Comment by: Alan Emmins - 2005-06-05 09:58
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Brings back bad memories, but a great peokm none the less. I can see I need to get me a copy of Last American Roar.
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