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zookeepers wife
christina rothenbeck
United States, NJ, Washington

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Song of the Mechanic

For M.F.

It begins with electricity.
Compression and combustion'
each movement born of tiny explosions,
pistons firing endless cycles.
Something happens: a valve sticks,
steel rusts, belts break.
Our job is to fix what no longer works.

We smell of exhaust, wear our names
above our hearts. Knuckles blackened
with grease, palms callused from the wrench's caress,
we spend days hunched over
or sprawled under metal giants,
fit incomprehensible pieces in the belly of our loves
until the engine thrums like a dangerous creature.

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Comment by: - 2006-02-11 02:31
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very good word selection. powerful. at least two very fine poets below testifying to your accomplishment here. my eyes are tinged green as i read you.
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-02-08 05:16
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'Our job is to fix what no longer works'

I keep sending people to read this poem, and then I come read it again. This time through that line jumped out at me. How poignant and how true.

"Our job is to fix what no longer works"
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-01-12 14:25
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Your poems are too much! They make me say YES! out loud. And my next response is to want to e-mail them to everyone i know. Would you mind?
Shaun Comment by: Shaun - 2005-05-27 02:54
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A great piece which brought to mind my days as a mechanic.
jp meredith Comment by: jp meredith - 2005-05-17 08:22
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Love the interplay (is that the right word?) of labor & love... working, building, fixing. I couldn't help but be reminded of the movie, 'All You Ever Wanted To Know About Sex...' the vignette where little people work the body of a man on a date with a woman. Not explained well. You'll know what I mean if you've seen the movie... a good, "early, funny" Woody Allen fillum.
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