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Bbounty1
Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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Make Believe

I can see that you are lonely.
Can't you see I'm lonely too...
I can be your one and only...
for just one night,
let's play the fool.

For just one night let's not be sad..
we'll pretend that it's not bad.
Imagination's all we need...
so let's play...make believe...
we're in love..

Let's play make believe...
we're in love.
Let's make believe...
we're in love.

Let's get lost until tomorrow...
Let's forget all of our sorrows...
Let's drink all that we can swallow...
of make believe...
of make believe...

We're in love.
Let's play make beleive...
We're in love.

Let's get lost for a little while....
Let's remember how to smile....
Let's throw caution to the wind....
cause tomorrow...
we'll just be friends again...
friends again.
We'll just be friends again....
friends again...

Who made believe...
for a little while....
they were in love...

We were in love...
for a little while....
we made believe...
we were in love.

Make Believe.

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lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-05-10 05:14
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poor Funkylele - you are such the romantic -- but then again, what do we think Bbounty might be with his triple tongue sword?
bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-04-18 22:16
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I think this is very nice...everybody should play make believe once in a while...bring a little happiness if only for a little while. :)
Funkylele Comment by: Funkylele - 2006-04-03 09:17
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Sigh...cut me to the quick.
You make me want to make believe I'm in love.
simple and poignant and yes...I know it's a song :D
Nice work
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-04-03 01:44
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Let's just sawt sum speling owt whyll wear at it.

Haven't quite caught the tune, but it sounds like it needs one.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2006-04-02 23:49
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Sounds like a song. You did good. It's very nicely written. Did you mean: Let's play make beleive...we're on love./or did you mean we're in love?
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