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Hope
Out of the darkness
An Angel
Lowers a gossamer thread of hope.
It waves tauntingly in the dark.
Not strong enough to support my dreams
Barely tangible enough to hold my sight
It mocks me, hanging just outside my grasp.
Light glimmers down its length
Bringing illumination to the depth.
Slowly it comes lower into the gloom
I touch it; it shimmers in my hand,
My lifeline to the world above
Not enough to lift me from the abyss.
Silently another glimmer appears.
Another thread slithers down from above.
My hopes cling to their tender lengths.
Another and then another, hope comes to me.
The threads I weave together
Painfully slow they thicken and form,
Into a shining lighted braid
Slowly they take strength from one another.
Hope brings new hope and new hope brings more hope,
Expectations of freedom rise from the chasm that imprisons me.
The cord, still far too small to pull me upward,
Gives me hope and comfort that
One day
I will stand in the sun and know joy again.
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Comment by: wwhijr - 2006-09-22 11:43
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| Thanks thekinj. Just make sure you give me credit for hte poem. LOL I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-22 08:24
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| I really enjoyed reading your poem. It captured me in its story like stanzas. My favorite line from this work was "Hope brings new hope and new hope brings more hope". I feel that that is a very true statement. I'm going to read this poem to one of my friends. I'll put this in my mental library along with the other good reads I've read. The growth of hope is slow and gradual, but inevitable if you continue to be patient. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-16 09:36
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| Wow, I enjoy this. Very nice work. |
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Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-09 18:12
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| I love to see people shine their light and you have done so. Great write, thank you. |
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Comment by: wwhijr - 2006-04-06 09:09
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| That is the beauty of poetry. It usually means more to the writer than any one else. As for the angel there is a specific one in mind that I wrote this for. The gossamer thread is lighted by carrying the light from above. At least it is in my thinking. Almost a fiber optic thing. |
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