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fiveringsstudent
Colin Ellis
United States, MO, Kirksville

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Sleeping Daisy

Holding my daisy blossom
Her petals flutter in sleep,
Her soft body quivering,
I feel her dreams.
She melts into me
With unspoken words;
I lay in rapture--
I will not sleep
For fear of waking.

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Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-06-16 03:08
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a few lines....can capture the essence of so many images. This poem is vibrant...I thought this was breath taking. Bookshelved!
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2006-06-09 13:12
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Beautiful metaphor carried all the way through in only 36 words. I love your style.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan Online- 2006-06-06 21:56
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very nice--
Comment by: - 2006-06-01 12:21
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ooh, the imagery is great here. very sensual. quite lovely. good write.
kennydpoet Comment by: kennydpoet - 2006-05-18 07:57
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I like this simple poem alot, it's so beautiful........Great imagery
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