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"empty kisses"...these words in themselves are so capturing. Nicely crafted and the rhyme is fantastic. I could connect myself and my life with this poem at places. :)
Nice work! |
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| Great rhythm and flow. Title is superb. |
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| Simple, witty and concise- exactly what a short poem should be. The reliance of rhyme to carry off this poem seems to be uses advantageously. Good stuff. |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-04 09:07
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| love this...you're a real talent |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-03 18:21
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| I love the notion of 'empty kisses'. That teamed with 'chaotic delight' is clearly a winner! Lovely :) |
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