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Branwen
Jessica Hunter
United Kingdom, Gloucester

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Torture Blood

I pick you up,
I lift you to the heavens
with the angels,
where you belong ,
a glorious smile of love and death.

and I want to hold you, tightly
and I want to take you, lightly

living in a lie
sacrificing all I had for you
living in the dark
seeing nothing but your sacred smile
which lights
and loves
and breathes the words
'I love you'
over and over again
and again
I can never seem to escape
your torture blood


you feel me fall
bent halfway to hell
in front of you
kissing your feet
loving you is the hardest thing to do

and I want to hold you, tightly
and I want to take you, lightly

living in a lie
sacrificing all I had for you
living in the dark
seeing nothing but your sacred smile
which lights
and loves
and breathes the words
'I love you'
over and over again
and again
I can never seem to escape
your torture blood

I want to hold you, tightly
take you, lightly,
shining brightly
don't leave without me.
I want to hold you....
I want to take you....

Torture my blood

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-03 16:45
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Nice lyrics. I really like, "and I want to hold you, tightly
and I want to take you, lightly"
Good write.
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