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A Latticework of Boxed-Up Stars, and Dark
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The bright sun was extinguish'd:
The blue black sky with its much-poked periods
Of stars shone with all their might.
I could taste her lipstick on the filter,
As our eyes flicked like a faulty screen
Under prickling stars: with stare, with curse.
I smelt latté mixed with fire on her breath
As she mouthed clichés with confidence:
Each catch of consonants packed with potential.
She told me how she fell to sleep
In a dirty blue chrysalis, of dreams and cold,
With the sound of his fists on the door.
The night sky is only a sort of carbon paper,
Smiling, recognising and going dark.
A single tear blistered the curve of her cheek:
She's in love with ideas, I'm in love when she cries.
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| "Mouthed cliches with confidence"-very vivid, and one of those wonderful phrases where the image is different enough to create a very singular sensation, but not so different as to jolt you from the sense of the poem. Excellent! |
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| Wow, I am in awe. Very detailed, beautiful words. I feel the emotions of the poem with each new word!! |
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"The Maker"
This short story reflects questions we asked as kids about how things were made by God and some of us are still asking some of the same questions (smile)
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