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Coupled with Dust, in the Shadow of a Stone
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Flames dance like red leaves in the autumn breeze:
Wax images, fixated: memorised by fire '
As static and rigid as china doll's bodies.
Large staring eyes: staring like corpses.
I am lost, lost in the robes of this light '
Unable to draw away my gaze,
Like a car crash on the motorway ' each
Casualty an entertainer, for a passing audience.
Woollen gloves grip fiery sticks
Tracing patterns in the air,
Leaving smoky trails, streaking the sky '
Until they blow the sparklers out.
Full of starch, I climb into a bed of fire:
My canvas body absorbs the flames.
Brightness ascends my thighs, as my face is
Scorched black: I am a dartboard for witches.
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| It's a great poem! I like it, starting from its title downto its last line. Favourite part: the last stanza. Nice work! Keep writing... |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-03 15:34
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I don't say this alot....BUT YOUR POEM ROCKED. I really like it; the metaphors and the flow are both brilliant. This is my favorite...
Flames dance like red leaves in the autumn breeze:
Wax images, fixated: memorised by fire â??
As static and rigid as china dollâ??s bodies.
Large staring eyes: staring like corpses.
I really like it...good luck with more work! |
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