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When Night Comes, Will it Save its Screen?

[cento]

Anxiety chokes me like razor wire,
My own blue razor rusting in my throat.
The rustle of blood echoes in my ear:
This mutilated flesh, our victim.

The skin could well be paper:
Our veins, white as pork fat, emboss
The smooth surface ' pores and lines resemble
Weird cheek-mottling, from pillowcase embroidery.

A face grown swollen, pale as the moon,
With two dark poppies congealed on his cheek.
Sweet penance for this sound
That became the beat of my heart on the sheet:

It might explode in our hands.

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MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-09 08:10
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Good description. I can feel the entire razor in the throat thing.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-03 17:20
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You're taking up too much of my bookshelf now. x
Comment by: - 2006-04-03 15:36
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Again, amazingly amazing.
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