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Comment by: - 2006-10-23 05:23
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| yea. eeyow thats some deep stuff. very abstract. interesting. |
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| love the imagery of the panhandling 'beggar of a thought' |
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Comment by: pinchus - 2006-04-04 17:47
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| As a disabled person I know this - too well, and you have caught this brilliantly. I would have been tempted to put; â??to learn ofâ??, a very minor crit. really. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-04 15:25
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This immediately made me think of mental illness (and I'd rather not explore the reasons). This is the only line I didn't love: "you learn of your body's economy"~~ (I didn't like the "you" and "your")~~something about that jars it out of its intimacy for me.
You are so prolific!! One great poem after another! I can't keep up with you, Paul |
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| that first line came fully into my head -- i only had to work on the rest. for some reason disease seems to be a recurrent theme in my work and i haven't figured that out yet. |
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