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Comment by: dseko - 2007-05-15 06:25
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| On my first read I felt the poem spoke to anyone who has ever experieince shyness. Then I read it again and I feltlike it was the thoughts of a person who had expeiernece heartache and pain and had withdrawn to get away. Good job. |
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-08 12:04
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| like this poem very much |
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Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-16 19:25
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| Oh this is good. I have the same experiences, with a certain someone. I like the simplicity of your style. |
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| interesting. there are times in my life when i want to not be the loud and abnoxious person that i can be at times. although, i do play the trumpet and apparently trumpet players tend to be loud and obnoxious. oh well. guess i'll have to get over it and always be heard... lol |
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| thanks everyone for your help so far.. i'll do some editing soon and repost! feel free to add any more suggestions : ) thanks again! |
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