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Comment by: - 2007-01-14 19:26
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| a poem everyone can relate too. who hasn't gone through this?" |
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I like the mystery of "then something changed"
Doesnt everything change in life? Sometimes without even being aware of it. So true. I dig the poem. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-05 14:43
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Your poem makes me want to pick up the phone and find those people that once upon a time i would have killed and died for. Time is a cruel bastard, puts up 'The barrier' (as you call it) with terrifying speed.
Its good to see a poem that isnt the usual teenage agonising. There should be more like this.
Im looking to read them all.
'It happens sometimes. Friends come in and out of our lives like busboys in a restaurant.'
From 'the body' by S King |
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| this a poem everyone can compare to. its written very plainly, and obviously, not like theres anything wrong with that....but it gives it somewhat of a conversation feel. with the sentences short and obvious (again nothing wrong!) it makes it seem sadder in a way, like your hurt so bad you cant really express yourself....all n all it has good meaning and pretty much all can relate |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-04 06:56
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| Well expressed, IMO. It's hard when that sort of thing happens in real life. This captures it pretty well. |
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"Zygote Abstract"
Zygote Abstract is an anthology of poetry, written by previously published and unpublished poets. This eclectic group of individuals have produced an audacious and profoundly moving work of written art.
The book is available at
http://www.rpwriters.com/Affliiates.html
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