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Forever spent
wondering your thoughts
do you love it,
hate it, get it?
Now,
right now,
I don't care.
My voice
echoes '
How cool it is!
I'll have to
listen.
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So fucking clever! (excuse my expletives). Love the last two lines and the fact you made the one line two....
You took a fragment of thought, a passing musing moment and chiselled it into a perfect miniature
