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song
Verse
Love me like you've never loved before
Baby dont walk away
Don't close the door
It aint that scary
I tell you true
Because baby i'm loving you
Chorus
You gotta let yourself love someone
Don't be afraid
Let yourself love someone
Baby it's ok
Verse
Now i know you've seen ups and downs
And your heart is tender and raw
Been broken so many times
You dont want to feel anymore
But if you trust me baby
I'll show you what lovins about
Chorus
You gotta let yourself love someone
Dont be afraid
Let yourself love someone
Baby it's ok
Bridge
Yes i know people are
Cheating, stealing
Beatin, killin
And you get
caught in the middle
But its ok
Coz i'm caught in the middle
With you
repeat chorus twice to fade
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-04-22 10:33
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| I can't add anything new here: it does sound a little fast paced, and I would like to hear the music along with it. But in my head, it sounds good. |
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Gotta hear the music with it. If I was to put music to it, I would change little things that helps the listener follow the flow of thoughts(lines) a little more easily. It also helps the singer such as;
(Please), Love me like you've never loved before
( So) baby don't walk away...............etc
It all depends on the music. |
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| yeah, like maggie asked... is is supposed to go so fast? it doesn't matter, i liked it. and it probably could go at any speed, it just feels fast when i read it. |
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| Sounds like its fast paced? |
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