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Love Is a Metaphysical Gravity
Radio Version
I am loving you long after the anesthesia wears off my vision
This is built off truest fruition
and not the chemical soul of, the chemical soul of .. lust
my sweet sweet sugary star dust.
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
This is not another fantasy trip with prefabricated
words that leave you feeling empty and alienated.
Believe me baby I am not suprised
I know it can be hard to be in love and still remain wise ..
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
When I feel the the insecurities flowing
and infiltrated fears growing
I hear you say "Be confident that even if our paths diverge
I will always work my way back to you for us to merge
as long as you shine the light to guide my way....
sultry, brilliant angel....to you --that is what I want to convey
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved.
K
Original Spattering
I am loving you long after the anesthesia wears off my vision
This is built off what is real and it's truest fruition
and not the chemical soul of, the chemical soul of .. lust
which fills you with a desire to be desired my sweet sweet sugary star dust.
This is not another fantasy trip with prefabricated
emotion projected onto another that results in later feeling empty and alienated.
I want you to know that you will be loved long after everything is gone
and maybe when we are not feeling just as strong.
Believe me baby I am not suprised
how it can be hard to be in love and still remain wise ..
I am just interested in what is beyond this illusion of the physical realm .. beyond those eternal eyes
I already know I love your sweet sexual physical being, but can we
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
and he/she said I heard somebody once say
"People say, it is a sin
to know and feel too much within
I always knew she/he was my twin
and then I found the ring
she/he was born in springbut then she/he had to wait
blame it on a simple twist of fate
So just open your eyes and certainly we found a way to let go and
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
oooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
Insecurities flowing, fears growing and then I hear from him/her say
Be confident that even if our paths diverge for the moment,
I will always work my way back to you,
as long as you shine the light to guide my way....
sultry, brilliant angel....to you
We are naturally crafted for each other.
The worst that could happen is not knowing WHY I love you so much,
but I see it now that and you are all I need, physically,mentally and spiritually.
Forget about all the fears of the past and lets...take this energy and
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
oooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
Perhaps you didn't bargain on becoming
involved with such an intense person.
Everyone has a shadow side,
but now you are more open to seeing it in someone you love.
You have the power to embrace the dark while holding onto the light.
It's time for you to do a shadow dance so we can
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
Tonight I am sleeping with an image of you in this heart and mind
becuase I choose to leave behind the fears that once would blind.
I found the deeper meaning in this life
with you...with you ..
and it's so so right.
K
Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved.
April 2006
Radio Version
I am loving you long after the anesthesia wears off my vision
This is built off truest fruition
and not the chemical soul of, the chemical soul of .. lust
my sweet sweet sugary star dust.
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
This is not another fantasy trip with prefabricated
words that leave you feeling empty and alienated.
Believe me baby I am not suprised
I know it can be hard to be in love and still remain wise ..
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
When I feel the the insecurities flowing
and infiltrated fears growing
I hear you say "Be confident that even if our paths diverge
I will always work my way back to you for us to merge
as long as you shine the light to guide my way....
sultry, brilliant angel....to you --that is what I want to convey
let Love be a metaphysical gravity
ooooo find deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning
find the deeper meaning in this life...
Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved.
K
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| Ok that is the best compliment yet ..the top .. I am officially almost big headed .. lol naw very humbled yet grateful .. thank you!! |
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| this is beautiful. for some reason, and i don't know why this is, it brought jim morrison to mind. i love each version and i like how you've managed to keep the essence even when you've pared it down. amazing. |
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lol... its optional ..insert name here ( ) is bascially what that means...
Ahhhhh might big thanks .. means alot coming from you |
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I love the title of this piece. It actually reads like a song, maybe because you have the repeating 'chorus' sections.
You have a strong theme here, one close to my heart..the many layers of love and attraction, the complex energetic bindings between souls...the only thing I wasn't sure about, maybe I didn't get it or it just didn't flow is the use of 'she/he'. It seems to break the flow for me |
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No words! Just pure emotion.
Excellent stanzas with lines with irregular word length to create suspense or a longing for a meaning of life and love. Strong rhyming couplets with excellent word usage. Good rythmic meter- almost makes me spin around and around.
Effective use of chorus after each stanza to demarcate seperate metaphysical issues.
Brilliant,just brilliant! |
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