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youngace17
Nick Clayborne
United States, Illinois, Gurnee

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Tiny Timmy

Today Tiny Timmy tries to talk. Terry Thomson tells Timmy that talking is too tough for a two-year-old. Tony Thomson tells Terry not to tell Timmy that. Tammy Tilson tells Tony, Terry and Tiny Timmy that Tinseltown has two tall towers, Tinseltown Toy Tower and Tinseltown Trinket Tower. Tammy tells Tony that there's a Two-Year-Old talking translator there. So Tiny Timmy, Too-Tall Terry, and Talkative Tony travel to Tinseltown. While traveling, Tony talked to their Treasurer, Tommy. Tommy told them to talk to Tina. Tina told Tony to travel tirelessly. Then, during the Thomson's travel, Tina traveled too. At Tinseltown, Terry taps a tambourine, Tony talks to a toucan, Tina throws a truck, and Timmy traverses to the trinket tower. Then he finds the two-year-old talking translator. It translated to this, why does this poem have so many T's?

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Robin Lockheart Comment by: Robin Lockheart - 2006-04-11 20:18
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Jeez how confuzing. I like the end hehe.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-06 15:18
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What a twister LOL
holy smoke Comment by: holy smoke - 2006-04-06 14:13
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Clever but honestly...

I read two line and skipped to the end. I wanted to kill myself reading this.
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