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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Falling forever

A tear falls forever in a broken heart,
And that tear falls for you,
Falling forever in love,
Falling in love with you.

And you don't seem to care,
That you're tearing my heart apart,
And I understand when you said that you loved me,
I wasn't supposed to take it to heart.

Never trust a man again,
He will only make you drown in your own tears,
Make you feel like he was wronged,
Reincarnate your fears.

And even though I hate you,
Every one of my thoughts are dedicated to us,
To the way I wanted us to be,
About love and not lust.
.
You said you didn't love me,
Said it was just infatuation,
All of my heart loved you,
Well I have learnt my lesson.

It feels like things won't ever get better,
The pain is just too strong,
Wish that I could turn of my life,
I have been in pain for way to long.

So stick a pin in my heart,
And see how it bleeds,
See if you can make me scream out in terror,
As you tell me you are going to leave

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Comment by: - 2006-04-25 03:36
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I have to agree with everyone else. It's really good, very emotional. I can't fault it.
mooseturkey Comment by: mooseturkey - 2006-04-21 15:32
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A great poem on a sad subject. Its a shame that some of the best poetry comes from the most painful experiences.
kyrasdaddy Comment by: kyrasdaddy - 2006-04-21 13:47
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wow, the imagery was fantastic and the sorrow was felt...I can relate, been there way too many times. Chin up! life is what we make it to be and sorrow builds up parts of our hearts that is difficult to understand. The poem brings out the sadness felt from the lost love, but also points out that you can move on, your thoughts are still dedicated to when you were together, but you don't dwell on it or let it consume you...Awesome poem!
Comment by: - 2006-04-13 18:13
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Beautiful. I could feel the pain as I read and it was excruitiating. You've got a gift for putting life into your poems.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-09 18:01
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that was good, did this really happen, were u expressing it or did it just come to you? But I liked it
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