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crazybeau
Romeo Roxas
Philippines, Lipa

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What other things or words can be compared to you?
That's the question that keeps lingering in my mind.
Maybe there's nothing in this world can find a way to do,
'coz you are the only one who have such features.

I have explored the massive dimensions of the universe,
and counted the infinity of stars way up high.
I have been to heaven to ask things that best describes you,
but all I got is a smile and a gentle shake of head.

My fortune acquaints me to wait for my destiny,
my mind tells me that I should soar the velvet sky.
My feet want me to travel from mile to mile,
but my heart urges me to search the answer deep within.

I'll swim the deepest sea if that's the only way,
or climb the tallest mountain just to find what I need.
I'll search deep down the earth until I reach the core,
and even meet the darkest king of all!

What other things or words can be compared to you?
That's the question that keeps lingering in my mind.
Truly, I could never find anything that best describes you,
'coz there's no such thing that can be as gorgeous as you!

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jandix Comment by: jandix - 2006-04-16 20:30
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Lovely poem,I hope the feeling only grows stronger.
P.S. thanks for the comment Jan
mooseturkey Comment by: mooseturkey - 2006-04-16 06:38
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Wow! This poem sums up how anyone feels when they meet that person. I'm liking this poem!
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