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crazybeau
Romeo Roxas
Philippines, Lipa

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Love at last!!! ( A love trilogy, CONCLUSION)

I who desperately thought that I will not find true love,
who shut the door in my heart, lock it up and threw the key,
who lose faith and hope after you have crushed my heart,
was eaten by my own pride.

I never thought I would felt this way again.
I was astounded by your look, your smile, and your affection.
Every single thing that you posses tells me that you're really the one,
the one whom I'll share my life with.

But is this really love?
Is this really the moment I've been waiting for?
Will this hurt me just like before?
Cause I don't want to cry no more.

Until time unveiled the answer to my question.
When you came to say that you feel the same way too,
and proved how special I was to you.
It makes me believe that we are really meant for each other.

Now that I got you, you got me, no one can tore us apart.
I am with you, you are with me, till death do us part.
There's nothing more that I can ask from God
cause with you, my life is complete!

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frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-07 17:16
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the title is great, but perhaps it would be wise to check verb tenses and things.. for example, in your statement, 'i ain't gonna found true love,' you should have used the word "find"... simple things like that... it's a great start tho. keep writing
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