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RWHARRIS
RYAN HARRIS
United Kingdom, WORCESTER

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Spare Thought

Let's hold back the joy
maybe just for one night,
think of the poor boy
whos family have no light.

With that cocoa we feel warm,
his baby sister feeling the cold.
looks like another finacial storm,
with each day they all grow old.

Button up boy,
keep your chin up
christmas is a time of joy
here take a sip from my cup.

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bckid2005 Comment by: bckid2005 - 2006-08-02 14:59
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this poem makes me realize that I have a pretty good life. Thanks for making me realize that.
desperado Comment by: desperado - 2006-07-24 23:59
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excellent enjoyed reading that wish those pictures in my mind you have drawn were not true but they are

good work
lordsofrome Comment by: lordsofrome - 2006-06-06 06:51
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Your poem shows a deep understanding and caring for what's going on in the world today. Excellent.
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2006-05-16 11:35
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this is probably one of the most beautiful sentiments i have read in a while..gives me hope to rise above...and to share. thanks for giving me faith in humanity again...
JewelMartin Comment by: JewelMartin - 2006-04-09 15:17
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It is disheartening to realise that in a world where so many have so much, even more have so little. Well written, Ryan.

Jewel
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