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An Unfortunate After-Dinner Incident (first draft)

Flaccid tubing snakes
Its way through the window:
Vomiting charcoal
Like an overdose patient.

There's fire in her throat:
Expanding virgin lungs
Dirtied from blowbacks; nicotine
Yellow fingers ease down the heat.

Eyes cold as chastity
Stare: glass marbles
In a perfect porcelain skull -
Dilating as the darkness prickles.

Light breath whistles
From her chokered throat:
Perfumed with the stench
Of gin and champagne,

It fogs the glass
Like the hurried gasps
Of teenage love:
Fingernails tearing at paper skin.

Pillar-box red lies wiped
Across lifeless cheeks:
Like a child eating strawberries.
Blue lips pucker,

As smoky diamonds
Blackened with carbon monoxide
Lie still on her moisturised chest; glittering
Against silent lungs.

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oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-05-15 12:43
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It fogs the glass Like the hurried gasps Of teenage love. Love these lines Amy. You have a way of making the morbid so beautiful
Elinki Comment by: Elinki - 2006-04-30 19:36
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I've notice alot of your poems are about the gritty parts of life. and your use of punctuation realy potrays that well. good poem. great discription
angeldawn21 Comment by: angeldawn21 - 2006-04-29 06:09
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"Eyes cold as chastity" - your word choice is impeccable! Another striking poem. I had to read it twice to grasp what was going on. Excellent writing!
Skytteflickan88 Comment by: Skytteflickan88 - 2006-04-08 10:48
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Powerful. And sharp. I really like this.
This is the second of your poems I've read and I like your style this far. Your picture looks so innocent and then I read this. Your egde is suprising..
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-07 13:40
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this is a very good piece of work.....
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