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reokie13
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United States, California, Redding

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Complicated

Love is like a lost dog,
to me.
It follows me around, every time, every day,
with a different name,
and at a different place.
Sometimes I like it,
sometimes I don't.
Sometimes I want it,
most times I don't.
Even though it is a lost dog,
it has teeth.
I have been bitten too many times
to let another bite.
Is it a risk that I am willing to take?
What if this one does not bite?
What if this one is different from the others?
It's complicated, and people take it for granted.
They think it is easy to understand.
Love is the most complicated thing in life.
Even though we think we may not want it,
we end up getting it.

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xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-19 07:58
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I agree with Spinnekop,this is great if you improved on the structure it would be flawless.great read thou.
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2006-09-06 13:29
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I enjoyed this poem. The first five lines and the last two work well. I'm having a little trouble with the structure though. Seeing that you are asking so many questions perhaps adding some line-breaks, placing each thought on its own could enhance an already good poem. Looking forward to reading more...
popeye Comment by: popeye - 2006-06-13 02:17
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brillant, i loved this poem a lot because of the way Love was personified, this piece is glimmering with unquenchable talent. WELL DONE!!!
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2006-04-05 10:04
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this poem is what it is. i didn't want to like it for a number of technical reasons, but I liked the last line. You liken it to a disease, or something. Or a bout of the flue.
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