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| I could list all that I love about this,but that would mean copying the whole thing...and I'm too lazy. Just a super job.Inspiring to say the least! |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-07 13:10
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| Master of the closing line. Good piece again. Personally one of the things I've enjoyed about reading your work is its voice, your voice, for me when you go so minimal a little of what makes your work stand above the rest is lost. Hope I've not offended.-B |
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| I read this differently. I read a more spiritual side to this. Surrendering to the 'beloved'. The love we look for is the love within ourselves. Yes, it can even be steamy and hot and so are our energy centers. Anyway, both interpretations to me are hot. Life is hot and so is our spirit! I definitely agree with Menoh. She captured your writing...divine. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-06 22:51
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i love "hot liquid love"
great words here. this flows so perfectly well. great atmosphere. |
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| I too love, ""Lust becomes/A dark/Hammer." I also particularly liked, " This Forge/Of Fury/Anvil of thighs" Excellent. I didn't like some of minimalism you employ though - just not my kinda thing. |
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