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I'm in todays world. Then drift back in time. If only for a moment. Sounds change and fade. People that have gone are almost within reach. If only it were in real time they would stay with me.
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I agree with dreamer I feel that you have the words and feelings available to you, so now you should think about giving them strength with structure. How you do it is what will make your work unique.
You have a gift that should be utilised to the full.
Try making one of your existing poems rhyme as an exercise.
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I've have read a few of your work. All describe a brief moment in only a few lines. To help your poetry work on how you organize the words. Format can say as much as the words you choose. The moments you choose are moving ones, so keep on working.
