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Garden Path
blue skies over garden again
young girl arrives, walks about
looking pensive and lost
the only special part--that Garden Path
capturing her attention near silence
where dove flies awaits
now white Garden Paths fade
into blue beginnings
then dove flies once more
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Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-19 16:30
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Interesting. I liked it. I had to read it twice before I understood it but I do now. My favorite part is...
now white Garden Paths fade
into blue beginnings |
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| 'garden paths fade into blue beginnings' cool line. cute poem. |
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Thoughtful peice.
Why is 'young' capitolized whent he start of all the other lines are lower case? |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-08 02:23
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| Thought a moment, and came up with an adjective - sweet. I don't know if it is a good one, but the poem, I thought, is wonderful. Too, I am not one to be a good judge of interpretation, but I thought of spring right away. Regardless, nice work. |
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