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Mark
Mark Botha
South Africa

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My all

my winter rain,
my deep-blue sky,
my summer thunder high above the cityscape,
my horizon line
where day meets night and stars are hid away
from sight,
my sierra wind, my aloe thorn,
my deepest fear and dearest wish and sweetest dream till now unborn,
my wildest horse huge with fawn
galloping through the dewy morn,
my careless laughter high and free,
my shaking frame, my afterwards,
my sacred name and my
hallowed words,
my candle flame,
my secret prayer,
my failing aim,
my aching shame washed away,
my moon by night and my warmth by day,
my noontime stroll where the children play,
my park bench drenched in soaking rain,
my Frisbee game in willow shade,
my fading pictures of the wars they made,
my inner peace,
my private ache,
my bell that tolls over hill and vale,
my graceful swan on silent lake,
my snowflakes light and white and pale,
my tales untold,
my pride on hold,
my teary eyes on a cold, cold night,
my frosty breath,
my impending death,
my endless search through blurry sight.

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Comment by: - 2007-07-06 17:52
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Very nice! It is a mirror that many look through and see what became of their lives. Your poem is very deep and many can relate to it. Your poem opens the eyes of all who reads it and blows upon the them a breathe on reality that is probably suppressed in the back of their minds. Yup.
elmarie Comment by: elmarie - 2007-06-24 13:09
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Straight from the heart
jelonbelon Comment by: jelonbelon - 2005-06-12 17:59
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That does encompasses all of ours yet still not ours
don't you think?
It's like sharing your all with my all
and becoming the global all
so we have a bond there
(forgive my rambling, I have lung fever, nice poem)
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