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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Hate me

Hate me,
You know you want to,
Hate me,
You know you should do

I have to hold back the tears everyday,
Seems like they will never go away,
Will you please, please save me,
Save me from this misery.

You broke my heart,
You've done it so many times it's an art form,
So how can I love you with all the little pieces?
And even now you're still breaking my heart.

When you're near me all I want to do is hold you,
Tell you how much I care,
But I have to walk away,
And it hurts more with every step I take.

I see you,
You act totally normal,
It's to painful,
Why can't you ignore me instead?



You're still breaking my heart
How can I still love you?
Was it because of me?
Was it my fault?


And when I sleep you're still mine,
You still hold my hand,
You still protect me,
I Wish I could sleep forever.

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CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-06-21 23:45
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I can't believe this is the same person who wrote Dreamcatcher. This is so full of despair, as opposed to Dreamcatcher's overall feeling of hope and redemption (as I read it).
It's nice to know there are still people who know how to make lemonade.
Suffice to say, I thought you were talented, now you've added versatile to that list.
Hollykinz Comment by: Hollykinz - 2006-04-26 13:48
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Thanks for the comments people! They really help! x
Comment by: - 2006-04-25 03:35
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I agree with moonfire, 'so many times it's an art form' is great. It reminds me of Lady Lazurus (Plath). Fantastic.
reflectingeye Comment by: reflectingeye - 2006-04-24 03:10
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i can tell that this was written from experience and very much from the heart. quite powerful stuff, great descriptive text and feeling. i must agree with lisa1065, the last stanza is probably my favourite, very sad.
Comment by: - 2006-04-20 16:43
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For me the last 'stanza' is the best. that one can still pretend things havent changed when we sleep. I recently lost (through a car accident) someone I loved (relation who was just 19) and when I dream I think he is still with us... Love your words.
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