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OhPoetic1
Monique Sahib
United States, va, Norfolk

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lost love

I am screaming
Can you hear me
My cries fall on deaf ears
my own pain engulfs me
I'm falling, falling
tripping over my own emotions...
I can't go on...

MY heart is faint....
my mind is weary...
my soul feels so empty
and where are you?

My love where are you?

You promised to be there for me
you promised to hold my heart in your hands
with the utmost delicacy
you promised to never make me cry...
I'm crying now and where are you?

my love where are you?

Why do you want to hurt me?
Why don't you care?
WHy aren't you here?
WHy aren't you real?

My hope for us is slowly drifting
All of the uncertainty and confusion-
it's driving me to draw conclusions...
I'm thinking this is false
I'm thinking this is wrong...
You should be next to me
whispering in my ear..
telling me you love me and no one else...ever
but where are you?

my love where are you?

I want to give up
I want to stop
I want to undo all of this
And never come back to it
Regret is tearing my insides out
in my mind, you and I are falling apart
and where are you?

my love, where are you?

I don't know where you are...
I don't know where we're going....
I'm not sure I want to continue....

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