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MMutami
Maxwell Mutami
Zimbabwe, Harare

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SWEET RIVAL

Had I time enough and skill
A discordant song for you I would compose
With hate the worn out horn my breathe would fill
For, singing for your collapse would be mine purpose.
Why should I not revenge
When daily the bins you make me scavenge ?

Had I money enough and power
I would for only you cut-throats hire
Or a trunk call hell make
Inviting Satan's disciples for soul to bake,
Kneel before your meanness and pray
For to my hate you could have fallen prey.

Had I keys to the wind's bank
In your sleep you would become blank
For air in your room I would remove
Happily I would know in rank none is above,

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LadyEgyptia Comment by: LadyEgyptia - 2006-09-19 07:53
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You have such clarity and strength. Beautifully and powerfully written!
FredaJane Comment by: FredaJane - 2006-06-03 21:04
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Whoo! Very powerful imagery and so rare to encounter clear anger under such control. I would fear to be the one/people who wronged you.

The writing of this poem must have been a cathartic process for you. Now written, do the emotions seem foreign to you or do they resurface as powerfully whenever you revisit these words?

Impressive.
graceshaker Comment by: graceshaker - 2006-04-10 21:37
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wow. such a concise expression of anger. really like the imagery of 'the winds bank'. i only wonder what you are raging against.
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