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ChrisHately
Chris Hately
United Kingdom, Co. Durham, Stanley

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When You Leave.

When you leave me,
I never know what to say, that could make you stay,
And I sit, and I cry about you,
And the hurt,
That leaving you will always bring,
To me.

When I see you,
My heart will dance with joy,
At the beauty of you face,
Your hands, your soul, your loving care,
And the fact that you are in love with me,
With me.

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-11-03 13:50
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I was just flipping through your work, after you posted on the forum...

I must say that I really liked this, it has a sort of old style Italian feeling to it, if you view it through the right lense.

Its good, and good enough that I don't feel bad for grave digging.
KeepBreathing Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2006-07-27 15:15
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I really like the lyrics. It is very pretty.
tatuwalker1 Comment by: tatuwalker1 - 2006-06-29 10:24
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will have to go look that up on myspace to hear it...nice though
love Comment by: love - 2006-06-08 01:12
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nice one, romantic.
i just broke up with my boyfriend..
i guess i feel the same.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-05-24 11:05
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that was great. as for me, the quest continues to figure out how to write lyrics to my music, or vice versa.
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