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ChrisHately
Chris Hately
United Kingdom, Co. Durham, Stanley

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Goodbye

*This song can be listened to at www.myspace.com/papersmiles*

I'm on your street on a Monday morning,
All the boys with their raincoats blowing,
In the wind on a windy day while,
People get into their cars,
And go to work

Standing outside the cornershop,
Packet of crisps and a coke in one hand.
Shopkeeper inside with his smiling face and,
Terrible jokes, we laugh,
Anyway.

And I stand in road,
I stand and think,
About all of the girls,
That I could meet,
And it gets me thinking,
"What makes you so special?"

And I think and I think,
And I think all night,
And I think if it could happen,
Well it just might,
And while my friends are giving me their sympathy,
I sit back and say "Well we will see".

The clouds are breaking, it's beginning to rain.
Raindrops are falling, beautifying the air.
The little kids are screaming and laughing,
I walk away, into the distance,
Goodbye.
Goodbye.

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Comment by: - 2006-04-29 02:30
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Good song Chris, sounds like the Jam a bit.
timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-04-25 07:08
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I've read , I've listened , and it's amaizing! I enjoyed reading it, but hearing it made me love it. Great, great,great!
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-11 08:42
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That was owesome, i loved it, it had so little words and was an easy read but said what it needed to
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2006-04-10 12:17
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beauty in only a few minutes spent .. sweet
ChrisHately Comment by: ChrisHately - 2006-04-09 13:19
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I had problems uploading it. I'll have another go soon, but as of yet, not there :S
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