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lofty
lofty
United Kingdom, Bolton

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Nail clippers

To tired to itch
Lie in discomfort
Do you mind...?
Wake up
Wake up
Lend a hand
Yes
Yes
Just there
Lower
Bit more
Just a scratch from a lover
Goosebumps
Rush of blood
Hardened tissue
Eager
Ready
Just an itch
Just scratch
Nine months later
Baby hatched...

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Comment by: - 2006-08-05 11:36
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Funny read, this has happened to many times to my husband and I..LOL. Thanks
jandix Comment by: jandix - 2006-04-14 05:51
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It made me laugh,good old Bolton humour eh!I liked the rhythm and style.got to read more.Thanks for the belly laugh.
Jan (wigan)
Comment by: - 2006-04-11 09:14
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another great write!
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-10 15:42
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Charming. good rhythm and additude!
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2006-04-10 11:59
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lol. You know its good. just perspectives.
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