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Dance6
Ashley Woods
United States

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Dally

Hey, this poem is describing a character in the book, The Outsiders.

Dally
Illegal, tuff, cold, and sneaky
Dally
Protected by his internal hardness
Dally
His record, nowhere near clean
Has been drunk, stole, and arrested
He was wanted at age ten
Dally
His love was hidden
Hidden within the walls of life
His one true love,
Johnny
A relationship like no other
Love was not shown till...
It happened
Burning flames, and excruciating heat
Johnny is trapped
He goes in
Before you know it they are in the hospital
Johnny is dying
Dying a slow death
When Johnny dies, Dally does too
His soul died then his body
And that is hidden love

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Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-13 08:51
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thanks
Skytteflickan88 Comment by: Skytteflickan88 - 2006-04-13 03:19
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Sweet and sad. The rhythmen is short and strong, which seems so suit Dally.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-12 11:46
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thank you
richardringer Comment by: richardringer - 2006-04-12 11:45
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I read that book so long ago I forget who is who, but I did like this poem.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-12 04:23
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lol, so did you think it was god, (thoose last lines) or no? (You said "ouch" so i wasnt sure)
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