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| This brought tears to my eyes...I can relate I feel second best to my sister....very well written:) |
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"Nobody notices when she tries
Makes an attempt
Of any kind
To make things better for her life
She was never better than the rest
This little girl has always been second best."
So sad. reminds me of...me...in a way...written splendedly. Truth usually comes out in the light some way or another...usually...I like the way it came out..although sad..but...finding a way to release whats inside...this..i believe is the best way.. :) |
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Comment by: lolly - 2006-05-08 10:23
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| i'm going to keep reading until you are self-actualized |
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| I can relate to this having 2 older sisters. You did a great job expressing your feelings here. I think the 3rd stanza (as cinders said) is the boiling point. maybe his disregard of her really made all the difference, and finallized what she thought about herself all along. great write. |
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1st thing I wanted to say was, "This little girl has never looked beyond what she considers second best. God, I want to lecture you on "looking for the good as hard as you look for the second best," but I'll resist. Besides, I just did.
Your poem was expressive and well written. You laid your thoughts right out there, said what you felt, and made us readers feel your pain. That's the essence of poetry. Well done. |
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